The Idea Of An Adult Poem by PRIYANKA BHANDARKAR

The Idea Of An Adult



Thoughts to be pondered on a happy note
we are the people of this nation
look up and jump around with joy
for happiness has unknown bounds
a victory to be pondered on
play a game and win it by hook
my child of delight on my lap
happiness and joy are my comrades
innocence and inspiration my power
think thoughts thrice, a symbol
look back and do not think to quit
for all this life can take
hail thee mighty: i have won.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the law which makes each person with virtues.to learn one must be great.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 13 March 2014

Again, to be understood with clarity, punctuation needs to be inserted, creating finite sentences so they can be understood and their meanings come across. It is a good poem about virtues and learning them. Please keep writing, I will read more as I am able. Thank you for sharing, I do like your poetry. RoseAnn

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