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(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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The images on mind may stay
That shall never go away
As those events were closely associated
Right from childhood till ate and fully related

I had shifted to city side
The ancestral home was divided
No one took care and it remained unused
Even children did not like to stay there and refused

Sometimes later I dropped in to visit
From outside it looked deserted site
I felt tremendous pain and grieved
I felt bad and eyes could not be believed

It was in total shamble
Some years ago it was considered to be temple
A place to live in with pride
I saw it in horrible condition after it was divided

I opened the door to see the horrible condition
It reminded me of close relation
So much warmth of childhood days
Where I had honor to stay

Parents were too good to afford
Yet they did all they could do to provide good food
I was given best education
They wanted to see me in good position

Even though it was in dilapidated condition
I felt their kindness with each inhalation
I breathed with close feeling and happiness
I could think of home with satisfaction on face

Submitted: Friday, September 20, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 20, 2013


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 8:52:00 PM)

    Frank Ekwere tru comment sir
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 8:42:00 PM)

    Seen by 22
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    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    A real poem


    Bijim Dominic14 minutes ago
    like to read the poem, poet shares his views with heart, like to read the poem, all the best

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    Temple


    Jawahar Gupta15 minutes ago
    A place to live in with pride.
    But Now
    Time Changes
    With the Changing Scenario
    No one love antique
    But Novel latest models, ,
    A Very heart touching
    And speaking the real mind,
    I Love the poem, ,
    The way it moves
    so swiftly,
    Comment 0
    Very Nice

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    Ruchika Sharma18 minutes ago
    This one was good...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:36:00 AM)

    Wonderful

    Dana Moon18 minutes ago
    lovely thought to finish on
    Comment +1
    Beautiful...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:36:00 AM)

    Liril Machaiah14 minutes ago
    Your emotions as you got back to your ancestral place is very well depicted in this poem! Am sure it was nostalgic for you...

  • Gajanan Mishra (9/20/2013 6:34:00 AM)

    close feeling, good write, thanks.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:15:00 AM)

    The images on mind may stay
    That shall never go away

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