The Image Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The Image

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The images on mind may stay
That shall never go away
As those events were closely associated
Right from childhood till ate and fully related

I had shifted to city side
The ancestral home was divided
No one took care and it remained unused
Even children did not like to stay there and refused

Sometimes later I dropped in to visit
From outside it looked deserted site
I felt tremendous pain and grieved
I felt bad and eyes could not be believed

It was in total shamble
Some years ago it was considered to be temple
A place to live in with pride
I saw it in horrible condition after it was divided

I opened the door to see the horrible condition
It reminded me of close relation
So much warmth of childhood days
Where I had honor to stay

Parents were too good to afford
Yet they did all they could do to provide good food
I was given best education
They wanted to see me in good position

Even though it was in dilapidated condition
I felt their kindness with each inhalation
I breathed with close feeling and happiness
I could think of home with satisfaction on face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2013

The images on mind may stay That shall never go away

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Gajanan Mishra 20 September 2013

close feeling, good write, thanks.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2013

Liril Machaiah14 minutes ago Your emotions as you got back to your ancestral place is very well depicted in this poem! Am sure it was nostalgic for you...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2013

Wonderful Dana Moon18 minutes ago lovely thought to finish on Comment +1 Beautiful...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2013

Frank Ekwere tru comment sir 9 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2013

Seen by 22 Tony Hansen likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 6 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2013

A real poem Bijim Dominic14 minutes ago like to read the poem, poet shares his views with heart, like to read the poem, all the best

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2013

Temple Jawahar Gupta15 minutes ago A place to live in with pride. But Now Time Changes With the Changing Scenario No one love antique But Novel latest models, , A Very heart touching And speaking the real mind, I Love the poem, , The way it moves so swiftly, Comment 0 Very Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2013

Ruchika Sharma18 minutes ago This one was good...

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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