The Incomplete Lines Poem by Kirti Sharma

The Incomplete Lines

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When am i going to choose it?
Or when am i going to save it?
The walls listen to my plans and laugh.
They hear every wish of mine going in vain.
They know me better then anyone else,
and they figure out the laziness in me.
They know how each step of my life would shape up,
and they know how each line would be left incomplete.

Monday, August 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2018

We start many things in life that we do not complete. Sometimes laziness, sometimes change of circumstances and sometimes change in perception keeps us from completing our unfinished works. Nice poem.

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Saadat Tahir 09 February 2017

indeed we steam on in life on those unknown lines... where they go where they end... what turns they will take.. where will we meet some one..or alight... nice lines that ruminate on the jpurney of life lovely content and context liked.. :)

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