Treasure Island

Kirti Sharma


I think he knows...


I think he knows,
the seed of his love in me, grows..
and every time i look at him
i wish if he could just smile..
knowing that i want him,
he ignores me, i wonder why...
Not a good reason yet found,
eyes that call me, doesn't stay around..
His heart if i could recall,
wasn't as hard, as it has turned now..

Submitted: Monday, July 14, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, July 15, 2014

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  • Akhtar Jawad (7/22/2014 2:45:00 PM)

    I am not getting words to comment. I can only say it's an impressive poem. But what is the solution of such problems? I don't know but I think laws should be framed and strictly enforced that responsibilities should be shared by both the lovers. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (7/17/2014 1:30:00 AM)

    I am deeply touched by this beautiful poem. The poem is beautiful but the feelings it evokes are not. Your sadness pervades the readers' minds.
    Your poem is somber, yet soft and smooth! It carries pains of betrayal, yet uncomplaining and not vociferous. Being at the receiving end, you haven't been harsh on the person you have spoken about. That's what makes you and your poem great. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (7/15/2014 10:53:00 PM)

    Very powerful portrayal of the change of attitude that happens in people to shirk responsibilities or blame....! Man is essentially selfish. They barter love with momentary pleasures! (Report) Reply

    Akhtar Jawad (7/22/2014 2:47:00 PM)

    I agree with Valsa, we are selfish.

    Khairul Ahsan (7/17/2014 1:09:00 AM)

    Dear Valsa, first time I see your comments are so gender biased! I am pained to see that.

  • Saurav Singh (7/15/2014 10:32:00 AM)

    Wow, literally a very powerful poem.
    An account of how people change miraculously under unknown circumstances, not realizing how it would effect the people so close to them.
    Subtle expressions but a powerful.
    : -)
    awsm poem. (Report) Reply

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