Kirti Sharma

Tale Of My Pen - Poem by Kirti Sharma

I sit to pen down my thoughts,
the cries, while smile, of my soul.
The sorrow it carries inside,
All the pains and regrets and the hard times.
Suddenly, my pen stops working..
had lived a full life,
coming to its end,
now it says good bye.
The same tale tells my mind,
finish this thought and move on,
and I close my book,
thinking that everything is over,
its time for me to sleep forever.

Comments about Tale Of My Pen by Kirti Sharma

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (6/22/2014 6:56:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Kirti. Its not the time to sleep forever. Its the time to sleep only to wake up in morning.
    Beautiful write. Keep writing. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 82 Points Nicole Gravell-pellerino (6/14/2014 10:35:00 PM)

    Beautiful.... you have a talent. keep on writing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,652 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/2/2014 6:45:00 AM)

    No, Kirti, you should keep writing. You write lovely poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ryan Duffy (5/31/2014 10:57:00 PM)

    A tale of life & death interpreted in only 13 lines with a deluge of emotion! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,758 Points Amitava Sur (5/31/2014 9:38:00 PM)

    It seems your pen speaks well, keep on moving it, I mean writing Ha Ha (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Saurav Singh (5/31/2014 9:55:00 AM)

    : -) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,675 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (5/29/2014 5:30:00 AM)

    Good morning poet Kirti. This was a good poem with a sad, dramatic ending.
    Thank you for reading, reviewing and commenting on my poem. Loyd (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,552 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/29/2014 5:06:00 AM)

    time to sleep, good writing, I like it, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 194 Points Anand Brown (5/29/2014 4:46:00 AM)

    Excellent poem. I love the progression that you employ, it renders itself to a strong narrative quality. I love the analogy behing the dying of the pen to the physical death of the emotional turmiol the speaker finds himself in. I love this extended metaphor. Well Done! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 29, 2014

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