Kirti Sharma


Tale Of My Pen - Poem by Kirti Sharma

I sit to pen down my thoughts,
the cries, while smile, of my soul.
The sorrow it carries inside,
All the pains and regrets and the hard times.
Suddenly, my pen stops working..
had lived a full life,
coming to its end,
now it says good bye.
The same tale tells my mind,
finish this thought and move on,
and I close my book,
thinking that everything is over,
its time for me to sleep forever.

Topic(s) of this poem: death


Comments about Tale Of My Pen by Kirti Sharma

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (5/1/2016 11:21:00 PM)

    The same tale tells my mind,
    finish this thought and move on,
    and I close my book,
    thinking that everything is over,
    its time for me to sleep forever.

    Nice poem dear poetess.
    Would love to read all of them.
    Thanks for sharing it. A 10 for it. (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (11/13/2015 2:16:00 PM)

    hallo it is not the time to sleep forever. dont end the poem like that.
    a fine morning with its golden rays waits for you. hope and joy shall remain in you. that is my wish. thank you. tony (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (6/22/2014 6:56:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Kirti. Its not the time to sleep forever. Its the time to sleep only to wake up in morning.
    Beautiful write. Keep writing. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Nicole Pellerino (6/14/2014 10:35:00 PM)

    Beautiful.... you have a talent. keep on writing (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (6/2/2014 6:45:00 AM)

    No, Kirti, you should keep writing. You write lovely poems. (Report) Reply

  • Ryan Duffy Ryan Duffy (5/31/2014 10:57:00 PM)

    A tale of life & death interpreted in only 13 lines with a deluge of emotion! (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (5/31/2014 9:38:00 PM)

    It seems your pen speaks well, keep on moving it, I mean writing Ha Ha (Report) Reply

  • Saurav Singh (5/31/2014 9:55:00 AM)

    : -) (Report) Reply

  • Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (5/29/2014 5:30:00 AM)

    Good morning poet Kirti. This was a good poem with a sad, dramatic ending.
    Thank you for reading, reviewing and commenting on my poem. Loyd (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra Gajanan Mishra (5/29/2014 5:06:00 AM)

    time to sleep, good writing, I like it, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Anand Brown (5/29/2014 4:46:00 AM)

    Excellent poem. I love the progression that you employ, it renders itself to a strong narrative quality. I love the analogy behing the dying of the pen to the physical death of the emotional turmiol the speaker finds himself in. I love this extended metaphor. Well Done! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 29, 2014



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