Geovanni Leaño

Rookie (August 31,1991 / Zamboanga City)

*the Kid Who Learned To Write - Poem by Geovanni Leaño

I was passing by the school's locker
Until I saw this paper on the floor,
I picked it up and was amazed by what's inside...
In a broken pattern It said:

'wan turite da bes leters por you,
Aymey bi jus sumwon,
samwon whu siting bak op you,
bat aya dor you,
ayheb dis filin me groaweeng
graweeng jaspor you,
you onli en onli you.'

Then I learned that it was from a seven year old kid,
This boy was exactly just like me,
But even though this feeling is just a kid's love,
I know, even a kid can love far more than Romeo and Juliet ^_^
Maybe one day, he too will experience this.
Maybe, I've met the next Romeo finding Juliet in the making...
This kid's got something,
He may be too bad at spelling words,
He may have the craziest grammar,
But one thing is certain - he can spell YOU correctly...


*Dedicated to me while I was a kid...*

Comments about *the Kid Who Learned To Write by Geovanni Leaño

  • Rookie Tanya Stanford (8/30/2008 9:30:00 AM)

    I love it. Dramatic and interesting. Well done (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Ryan Camansa (7/14/2008 10:28:00 AM)

    Fantastic toh! I can feel the emotion (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Cheung Shun Sang (5/20/2008 12:48:00 PM)

    Beautiful done. very good poem. i give 10 stars (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 877 Points marvin brato (5/20/2008 6:41:00 AM)

    A true poet writes from the heart to express innate emotions that overrides the mind! High marks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 17, 2008

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