Treasure Island

Geovanni Leaño

(August 31,1991 / Zamboanga City)

font color='#FF00FF''To My Friend April'/font



.....................It'sSoAmus.........'You Are My
................ingHowLittleThis........8th World

.............WorldIs, ThatTheWo.......Wonder...'
............ rldLeftThisSpecialPlac.... .....-April F.
.............eForUsTwo, NowI'm
................LearningToCallY......ouM
................... .yFriendAtLe.........ast, A
.........................ndHow.............FastI
................. BecameComfo.......rtable
..............too, NowEveryMor...ning
..........IWish..ToDropY..ouBy, A'
........Good.....Morning'......Tha
.........tCan.....MakeMeS
..........mileI....nside, And
............Eve...ryOnceInA
............. .Wh.ileISometim
........ ..........esSigh..., Won.....By:
.................dering......WhyA......Lex_Potent
............... .mIFee.......lingThi
............... .sWayI.......nside, I
...............sIt'Coz......IMissT
................ .heFrie......ndIFo
................. undIn......You?
...........AndAllTh......oseHappy
.........MomentsH.......aveGoneSo
Fast, NowIWriteThisPoemForAGreatFriendLik
eYou, AndAlthoughWeBothKnowThatTimeRu
nsSoFast, TheMelodyWeHearWillAlwaysRema
in, JustLikeOurFriendship, WeWillAlwaysRemain.

Submitted: Tuesday, April 22, 2008
Edited: Tuesday, April 22, 2008

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  • Sara Neame (5/1/2008 12:05:00 PM)

    This is great. I love the way you have arranged the text. It does make it a bit difficult to read, but that doesn't matter. It helps the reader to concentrate on the words and the meaning. Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Wilfred Mellers (4/24/2008 11:55:00 AM)

    I see that you have a unique style of writing. I did find it a bit hard to follow seeing that you put it in a shape of a person. I would have never thought of that. I like it. It is well written. I look forward to reading more of your poems (Report) Reply

  • Joseph Cross (4/22/2008 4:26:00 PM)

    This is more than poetry. It is literally a work of art. To put a poem in this form is brilliance. I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Kristy Artmann (4/22/2008 12:35:00 PM)

    Awh, that is unique and fun! Great job on the poem and the form in which it appears...Best wishes,
    ~Kristy~ (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (4/22/2008 10:08:00 AM)

    Dear friend,
    that is simply
    wonderful Art of love
    as when curved by the words
    from the heart when burning brilliant
    by the passion rocked by blue................really fantastic curvature of inner swing,10/10, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Yaritza Florencio (4/22/2008 10:07:00 AM)

    i read some comments that said you over did it with the lines....yea i dont think so...its perfect the way it is..awesome words and creative appearance everything poetry should be (Report) Reply

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