The Lantern-Flies Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

The Lantern-Flies



Swarms of lantern-flies
Are twinkling in starry night
In the bamboo garden!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Derek Haughton 27 April 2012

If you're going for seventeen syllables, not quite there! If a more modern haiku fine. A good attempt

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Eman Obied 27 April 2012

short to point and Beautiful!

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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