Aubrey Silver

Rookie (12/06/91 / new mayhem)

The Light In The Night - Poem by Aubrey Silver

do you see that there? do you see that light?

in the darkness there is always a light just like if you have suicidal tendinchies there is always some one there for you

there is alway a light in the night no matter how far astray you are
just know that people will help you no matter wat you just have to ask
and so i ask you do you see that light?

i have and i follow that light around every corner of the would of night...


Comments about The Light In The Night by Aubrey Silver

  • Rookie Nicholas Spandrel [Enjoys Writing Poetry] (2/9/2009 8:41:00 AM)

    Awsome job Aubrey
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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (2/7/2009 1:25:00 PM)

    This is a most powerful message. Though I would check the last line again if I
    were you. I like the way you went directly to your message. No wasted words.
    Excellant presentation.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Darkness J (2/5/2009 2:35:00 PM)

    I like it. An optimistic vision. Keep it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 3, 2009



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