The Little Chimney Sweep - Victorian Times Poem by Ernestine Northover

The Little Chimney Sweep - Victorian Times

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What is above all these chimneys, I asked the young lad,
The chimney sweep boy replied,
Why Sir, it's the sky which is sometimes so blue,
That when I look up and glance at the view,
Such glory cannot be denied.

What lies in that sky then, I asked the young lad,
The boy gazing up now replied,
Oh Sir, clouds and sunshine, at night moon and stars,
Planets like Jupiter, Saturn and Mars,
What wonders out there can be spied?

Is your work very unbearable, I asked the young lad,
Most times Sir, it is, he replied,
From dawn until dusk, I'm climbing to sweep,
The soot from the chimneys, for my food and my keep,
My Master cannot be defied.

Do you 'welcome' the sky, I asked the young lad,
When I'm climbing, I do, he replied,
It's my friend when it's dark and the way up is hard,
Because sometimes I get burn't and then badly scarred,
There's many a time I have cried.

What then do you wish for, I asked the young lad,
With yearning, he slowly replied,
I would love to be free and fly like the birds,
Way up in the sky, and if I had the words,
Write about how I'd feel like inside.

© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 15 February 2020

Wow- What a wonderful write! The dream and aspiration of the young lad engaged in the work of cleaning chimney has been so eloquently expressed.Let me quote- 'What then do you wish for, I asked the young lad, With yearning, he slowly replied, I would love to be free and fly like the birds, Way up in the sky, and if I had the words, Write about how I'd feel like inside.'

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David Harris 15 February 2008

Ernestine, thank you for the nudge towards this beautiful poem. As Duncan said you gave the lad a voice which is wonderful. Top Marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David

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Sylvia Spencer 19 October 2006

Ernestine just lovely you are so right they are a good subject to write about, there is so much in the past that people take for granted and just accept things as they were, without looking into why or how. Loved the poem. cheers Sylvie

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Duncan Wyllie 14 April 2006

You gave the little boy a voice Ernestine, what more could any one need, wonderfully written Love Duncan

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 18 October 2005

This is a nice poem...I enjoyed it!

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