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ramesh rai

Silver Star - 9,013 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

The Lost Star


One star has lost his home
where to go, where to bend
orbit is out of his sight

All stars are whispering
who about this lost star
but is not known to lost star
where to go
like a lost child
who does not know
where to go about
and crying for help

A lots of stars, busy in their affairs
because they have to complete
their assignment before dawn

Night is falling at every moment
but none heard his cry

Moon, the hero of night
did not take care of child
even what to do
for the lost child

The lost star is lost
in the crowd of stars

From to-morrow
he may not be seen

Who is taking care for whom
when the entire creation is made
to conplete one's assignment.

Submitted: Wednesday, June 19, 2013
Edited: Thursday, June 20, 2013

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  • Silver Star - 9,013 Points Ramesh Rai (6/19/2013 9:18:00 PM)

    Thank you so much Sj Holland for your beautiful comment n advice.Here it is only rough sketch.
    regards. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Sj Holland (6/19/2013 9:09:00 PM)

    Your work sounds so magical. I felt myself floating as I read. You just need to correct a few typos, and it'll be okay. Have a nice evening. (Report) Reply

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