! ! ! The Love Today! ! ! Poem by kite remedy

! ! ! The Love Today! ! !

Rating: 3.0


The love today,
is it what we try to find?
Does the world force us to fight?
Does it feel right
to make others cry?

The love today,
is it what we whisper in our prayer?
When we're so tired and in a heavy rain,
having injured and in a great pain,
is it where we try to run away?

The love today,
is it the meaning our lips want to scream?
is it the meaning our hearts want to keep from grief?
When others plead for others' mercy,
can we just stay still and let them be?

The love today,
swaying slowly by a breezing wind,
displayed sadly on a TV screen,
the puddle by a cracked street,
is reflecting the love held by a sleeping kid.

The love today,
have taught me a simple meaning,
when in our heart, sorrow is clinging,
when we're exhausted, we may just sing,
'there's no more love than what we believe in...'


P.S.: Dedicated to EVERYONE who is involved or cares about Middle East Tragedy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 02 January 2009

Very much in the Bible whats happening

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<font color =fusha>Amy 02 January 2009

i liked it especially the repetetiveness of the first line nice write

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Subbaraman N V 03 January 2009

Yes, the world needs it very badly today! A nice write!

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Vaibhav Pandey 07 January 2009

very thoughtful and touching....... loved it. 10

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amusing... yes, where's the love now in this kaleidoscopic world of ours... like it thanks for sharing

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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

'there's no more love than what we believe in...' Rachel Ann Butler

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Reihaneh Jalalian 15 January 2009

kite it was wonderful, i loved it so much. i love your feelings. it was beautiful. well done

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David E. Patton 14 January 2009

This is a wonderfull poem, well writen and heart felt David

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Fiona Davidson 14 January 2009

Excellent strong write...Fi

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 13 January 2009

that was so much of honesty... and hoping and praying the world can be a better place to live in...! ! ! : D

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