The Meaning Of Paradise Poem by Louise Tredoux

The Meaning Of Paradise



I just wanted to sleep next to you,
hold you tightly pressed against me
and feel your warmth, one leg crossed
over one of yours, nothing more, nothing
less, I just wanted to be with you
in a way that let my senses know
you were there, listen to you snoring
softly, knowing your strength as well
as your vulnerability, I just wanted
to be in your vicinity, knowing your
presence physically, enjoying the
abstract thought without losing the
physical experience - When I fell
asleep behind you, your body held
in the curve of mine, and woke up
with you still in my arms, my legs
still intertwined with yours, I knew
the meaning of paradise….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fred Babbin 02 June 2008

Very nice, but I like this one better: Biography May this day bring joy and freedom and happiness, may my hand write down the thoughts of the gods and fill the reader's mind with new ideas and wonderful new ideals! ..

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