Each day when sun rises at dawn
and on their perch the sparrows tweet
heavenly pearls roll down my lawn...
Each day when sun rises at dawn
and rainbows on the sky are drawn
the cuckoo sings some melody sweet...
Each day when sun rises at dawn
and on their perch the sparrows tweet...
This is indeed a finely crafted poem, smooth in its flow, musical in its rhythm and meaningful in its content....good work prashant..I am giving it a 10...pls read my poem called AU REVOIR
Nice one, but I think you did not complete it. For me it is incomplete, although it epitomizes the morning glories and miracles of each passing day, you should complete that poem because it will be better of. thanks for sharing.
this is beautiful, Prashant; you capture the brilliance and joys of nature's gifts. mark
The arrival of the dawn complement by birds' jovial song makes the morning beautiful. A lovely piece penned!
Nice work Prashant, yes, each day is a repetetion of a wonder, we never get tire of!
very musical..a good one for a triolet...very well done
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Bursting with beauty.