The Most Beautiful Goodbye Poem by Anne Yun

The Most Beautiful Goodbye

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The most beautiful goodbye
is a flower in a life time
Memory of infancy, death in prophesy
all stemming from that ground
where you stood with a little proud
waiting unknowingly for my coming goodbye

I have been folding a paper flower
on where i paint words as a lover
but i think i am still quite a failure
for i paint it with no color

When night like this time
weave your smiles in sweet rhyme
all goodbyes happened once in my life
blush into my face again like that eve

Torn by the passion, helplessly i prepared
that weakest and strongest goodbye
in which i saw our most beautiful eyes
colors in them have been fading these years
for time constantly bringing new faces

They try to mess colors on my paper flower
but turns out they are the same failure
so it remains in no color, my fragrant flower
blooms every year, every season, every night
together with all others
in trees, in wind, in gardens, in wild

Now and forever, i will paint words as a lover
on this paper flower
for it's the most beautiful goodbye
definitely in a life time

The Most Beautiful Goodbye
Sunday, March 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Since no living and breathing man can live without memory, then why not take it as the most beautiful goodbye to cherish as a flower in a life time.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 15 April 2017

my fragrant flower blooms every year, every season, every night together with all others in trees, in wind, in gardens, in wild Now and forever, i will paint words as a lover on this paper flower for it's the most beautiful goodbye definitely in a life time - - - - -Fond memories of life- - -the events and people- - - - we say good bye always as nothing is permanent- - - - -But what better way to say goodbye than folding them into paper flowers of poetry.- - - Excellently written.Loved this poem.

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Anne Yun 25 April 2017

Thank you, Bharati.

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Daniel Brick 15 April 2017

I love this poem. It has the quiet, unexspected strength I appreciate. And there other levels of appreciation in the poem. Ity is like a summons to find the wonder in life which is a; readyu there but we don't see.it. Untol a poet points it and the light of truth floods our mind.

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Anne Yun 25 April 2017

Thank you, Daniel. Recently, I feel my heart is so empty that I have nothing to write, but life becomes nearer and dearer, like an indescribable poem.

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Seamus O Brian 10 October 2016

This is a hauntingly beautiful piece. It accomplishes what all great poetry should: leaving echoes of emotion rippling through my heart long after the last line fades.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 March 2016

Now and forever, i will paint words as a lover on this paper flower for it's the most beautiful goodbye definitely in a life time.. very fine, very expressive a wonderful graphic. i love this poem very much. tony

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