The Nature's Comfort Poem by Vaibhav Simha

The Nature's Comfort

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How can you be sad,
When birds around you are glad,
Happily flying, chirping and gliding?
This is our Mother Nature's play of comforting!

When rainbows dazzle across the sky,
Vibrant and visible even though miles high.
It represents hope: hope that you can be beautiful
Just as a rainbow; all you have to do is be hopeful!

Apes dangling high up from the branch
Of that very tree which we thought was an avalanche.
This reminds us of the power of the mind,
As what we think of is usually what we find.

Lion wild, fights the most gallantly,
Yet it takes contusions which may heal fluently.
It tells us how confidence can matter
As excess of it often makes our worst flatter.

Yet there still are many through which
Nature plays its game of comfort,
Through which we become at heart rich
And in the mind the will to put in enough effort.

In ruins be the citadel of misery;
Growth be in the minds, very visionary!
Until you realize the one who created this.
It's God, the Almighty and the spreader of bliss.

Saturday, September 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(Editing done to this poem after three years, which I was reluctant to do before as I love to conserve the original countenance of my older poems so that I can look back and perceive the evolution of poetry that I am sure is explicit throughout my chronological catalog of poems, for I am a maturing boy who is flabbergasted by the progressing acme of my semantic knowledge year by year.

I thank poetess Valsa George for cudgelling me to do this after three long years of barratry and laxity in this case.)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 18 May 2020

This poem presents the comfort Nature can provide! When everything in nature augurs happiness and joy, how can human mind alone remain sad and dejected? The surroundings can make our mind bright or gloomy. So saunter into Nature, when one is weighed down! Nature also teaches the lessons to survive and to be winners in the fight for existence. Except for minor language errors which you can correct on attentive reading, the poem is well composed.

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Cheryl Tutaan 16 September 2017

Until you realize, who created this? It's God, the almighty and the spreader of bliss I truly enjoyed reading every word of it...i loved the way you give life to the nature in this poem and the rhyming of words as well... thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, Vaibhav....10++++ Cheryl

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Vaibhav Simha 17 September 2017

Thank you, if interested, you can read my other poems as well. P.S. I recommend my poem Rainbow Above the Tree.

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