The New Poem Poem by Daniel Brick

The New Poem

Rating: 5.0


There it is - the New Poem. Read it and
read it again. Make it feel welcome because
730+ poems crowd my collection and recite
theselves in soft voices. The new poem is shy,
its subject is an epiphany of grace, received
when least expected but most urgently needed.

Why is this? Can we comprehend the progress
of an idea which makes a dwelling for itself
within the brain space we call "Mind? " Tendrils,
of the extremest flesh, connect the visible
with the invisible. The mind adjusts the message,
the brain says this in the most decent language.

Friday, December 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: mind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 11 December 2020

Amazing piece of work by an excellent poet, it deserves no less than 5 stars, thanks for sharing with us this unique gem

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Daniel Brick 18 December 2020

Soran, thanks much for your commrent. I appreciate your calling it " a unique gem." Gems are rare, and sometimes a brief poem has everything in a rare proportion: language, length, message but it's rare when everything comes together - at least for me. I tend to use too many words - BUT I LOVE WORDS - I inherited this love from my fictional brother, Hamlet, when asked, " What are you reading? " he said, " Words... words...words."

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Richard Wlodarski 05 December 2020

A brilliant interpretation of the mind wrapped up in poetic expression! Such a pleasure to read your work, Daniel!

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Daniel Brick 18 December 2020

Hi RichardThank you,

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Bharati Nayak 04 December 2020

There it is - the New Poem. Read it and read it again. Make it feel welcome because 730+ poems crowd my collection and recite theselves in soft voices. The new poem is shy, its subject is an epiphany of grace, received when least expected but most urgently needed.- - -Your new poem is most welcome.

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