The Not Travel Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

The Not Travel

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the not travel

I was up early going to my little house
in Benafim, I need some work done like water leaks
and gas connection
My wife came down with her serious illness
there was the talk ringing a doctor.
The trip was postponed.
During the afternoon she began feeling better
it was then too late to travel.
But I have to leave on Sunday so the porter can
carry my bags to the car.
If she is not coming, I will drive alone slowly
but would like her to go along she does
the talk better than I
I know she is hypochondriac even they can be right
and without a car, she has to take the bus.

Saturday, May 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 01 June 2020

A loving and caring attitude towards the beloved wife. To be respected such a behaviour. Indeed much cozier if the poet's wife will come along. I like very much the loving and caring attitude in the poem. These words made the beautiful poem most beautiful. What do we wish in life than being together constantly with the loved one in such an understandable way. Thank you so much for sharing this beauty of heart

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Varsha M 30 May 2020

Lovely poetry requesting the sick wife to be by his side because she is good and explicit than him. Awesome gratitude. Thank-you Sir. Admirations.

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