The One Poem by Smiling Inside

The One



i've got this weirdest feeling deep inside,
a kind of feeling which I can not hide,
butterflies wonder all around,
they're not even making a single sound,

love just pushed me to your direction,
by just seeing you I feel a kind of satisfaction,
makes me want to rush for some more
so you're the one, that's for sure

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Afzal Shauq 26 June 2010

love just pushed me to your direction, by just seeing you I feel a kind of satisfaction, makes me want to rush for some more so you're the one, that's for sure true.. what yu expressed is reality based.. i enjoyed your poem dear friend and read few times and found it quite impressive with rich idea..appreciate you 10/10 +++++++

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Andrew Bellon 11 June 2010

simple, direct, powerful.

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