The One That Got Away Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

The One That Got Away

Rating: 5.0


I had a poem in my head
Today when I got out of bed
But when I went to write it down
It was not there; it had skipped town.

It will come back some day, perhaps,
If I avoid those lengthy naps!

The One That Got Away
Wednesday, July 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,life,muse,poems
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On Sunday, July 12,2015, I woke up with a few lines of the start of a good poem rolling around in my head. Before I left church I had about six lines. I just needed a couple more good lines to finish it.

We (my wife and I and one other couple)had attended a craft fair the night before. On the way home we stopped at a popular restaurant and had a delicious baked salmon. We got home very late. After church we were so tired we took long naps.

After my nap I thought I had better write down as much of the poem as I already had, so I could finish it later. To my surprise, the poem was gone! I couldn't (and still can't)even remember what it was about.

And I thought fish was supposed to be brain food...

15 July 2015
Recife, Brazil
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 21 September 2022

Thank you very much, Dillip Swain, for adding this poem to your favorites!

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Valsa George 22 July 2015

This has happened in my case too! Sometimes thoughts and words flow unhinged! If we don't put them down into paper instantly, they easily flow out into the drainage, unable to be retrieved! Though terse, the poem comprises similar experiences of very many! I have expressed a similar dilemma in my poem- Stillborn!

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Spock The Vegan 15 July 2015

Maybe the fish clears out the brain. You look very tired in the photo - better take another long nap.

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