twilight by the river


The other me


Blurry vision in a stormy night
Wondering what to do right
Where did i lose my peace of mind
That i'm craving so hard to find
Being here consumed me
I'm just a walking shell
With no existing memory
Chasing my silent heart beats

Submitted: Sunday, May 09, 2010
Edited: Sunday, May 09, 2010

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  • Rookie Hussein Ahmed (5/9/2010 10:07:00 AM)

    Great poem that conveys the feeling of emptiness quite well. I like how this developed from 'Blurry vision in a stormy night', ie. confusion/unclearness, to just emptiness.

    Please take a look at my poems if you would.

    Peace. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (5/9/2010 9:22:00 AM)

    Chasing my silent heart beats
    likedthis expression
    write and share. Good luck to u
    invite u to read my poems too. God blesss (Report) Reply

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