Shalom Freedman

Gold Star - 4,892 Points (Troy New York)

The Poem Is Going On Now - Poem by Shalom Freedman


The poem is going on now
The poem is this walk
This wind this light these trees
The poem is going on now
Just being alive now
Is suddenly everything I ever wanted
This wind this day
This life this world
This quiet Yerushalmi street
The poem is going on now.

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  • Rookie - 145 Points Romeo Della Valle (12/22/2009 10:42:00 PM)

    Well penned, simple and clear, great I like it, keep it up,10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 22, 2009

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