The Poem Must Go On Poem by Bill Cantrell

The Poem Must Go On

Rating: 5.0


There exists a poem,
we hear just before death
Departing in silence,
upon our last breath
Each one is customized,
unique to their needs
Pole bearers are endorphins,
preparing release
A book judged by its cover?
Often not what it seems
Yet, knowing the author,
the dead wait patiently
A dream within a dream,
is when galaxies collide
Death rearranged,
brings back life in good time
Then our poem shall continue
with the returning of life,
as death will be slaughtered,
as the truth wins the fight

The Poem Must Go On
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
About death and the resurrection of my wife and names written in the book of life, This poem I wrote on purpose to be a bits and pieces, because when you see your loved one dying, our thoughts bounce back and forth guided by our emotions
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 19 February 2023

this is strong writing and all the stars in the sky would not be enough but I give it 5 because that is all that is allowed, and a fav

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Susan Williams 19 February 2023

Bill, you have the heart of both poet and soldier---this poem both grieves and uplifts, dreads and hopes---

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Bill Cantrell 21 February 2023

Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment

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Bill Cantrell 19 February 2023

InSusan, only you would discern the part that uplifts, that is what makes you na great poetess, you decipher. The heartbeat of words arranged

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