The Poem That Is Not Good Enough Poem by Shalom Freedman

The Poem That Is Not Good Enough



THE POEM THAT IS NOT GOOD ENOUGH

The poem that is not good enough
Awkwardly fumbles from line to line
Does not hear its own music
Has none.
Its words are larger than its feelings
Its Ideas overwhelm its words
It proclaims a Beauty it cannot reveal.

The poem that is not good enough
Pretends to be a poem
It has birds and flowers and trees and winds
which are names alone.
The Poem which is not good enough
does not touch the Heart
has little Soul
puts everyone to sleep before they finish
beginning it.

A Poem that is not good enough
Just does not Live


And who am I?
And what are you?
And why are we?

Writers and readers of Poems
Looking for our own lost Eternity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Audrey Stephenson 11 May 2008

Who you are cannot be determined by me I am a sparrow's nest Because I am free I hope you are free as well.

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