Kevin Patrick

Silver Star - 3,365 Points (Taurus / Ontario)

The Prologue Of Breath - Poem by Kevin Patrick

Heaven is Hell, upside down
Wherever you view it, will be your crown
Paint the jewels in a color
In amorphous arms, keep you in slumber

Awake to the dream; know it’s real
The taste of reality is always quite sour
The faithful laugh in ridicule
Pause unconcern: relief is for the medicinal

Above the sky sits the empty world of space
One day you’ll find it can be a very busy place


Comments about The Prologue Of Breath by Kevin Patrick

  • Rookie Stefanie Fontker (10/27/2011 3:37:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed reading this. You offer some very interesting metaphors, beautiful work, as always. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Shadow Girl (10/27/2011 8:19:00 AM)

    nice flow and thoughtful write..i like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 26, 2011



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