The Real You Poem by mona martinez

The Real You

Rating: 5.0


wow, a whole new you,
i never thought i see,
so shy to show your true self,
i wonder why,
when we all go through the same thing,
i can be alittle too opened for you,
can't you do the same in return,
i think often if i made the right choice,
to be with somebody who cares,
but are you playing it alittle too safe?
couples have problems,
that how they get stronger,
never changing can become boring,
can't you take a chance,
things happen for a reason,
wether we want them to or not,
we can't control everything,
somethings are out of reach,
but, what we can change,
is the way we do things,
i'm tiried of playing safe,
it not who i am,
stuff i say, is what on my mind,
yeah abit to honest at times,
but, that just who i am,
why lie, when you would know the truth?
i'm never fake, what you see is what you get,
ain't that how it should always be?
we should show who we are,
sooner or later it will come out,
shouldn't you show the real you in the begining?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 30 May 2009

shouldn't you show the real you in the begining? bingo...absolutely nice write cheers

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yeah, we should! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Brishti Mazumdar 06 June 2009

shouldn't you show the real you in the begining? No, my dear...in that case this world would be barren of any relationship... ...liked your poem...10+...Brishti Mazumdar

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oki............. nice poem.. mona...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 05 June 2009

'we should show who we are, sooner or later it will come out, shouldn't you show the real you in the begining? ' Beautifully penned, I love the last 3 lines most. 10+++ with joy.

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Brishti Mazumdar 02 June 2009

No dear, if you show the real you in the beginning, you will have to live a deserted life.Good poem....

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