The Road To Joyabaj Poem by Seamus O' Brian

The Road To Joyabaj

Rating: 5.0


Heaven pierced the rim of the world
This morning in two gashes laid upon
The flinty grimness of a gray horizon
Through which the glories of heaven-
A cascade of golden light
Fell in radiant streams upon
A world hardened and grayed
By a deficit shaped like the absence
Of the color of love
A world dominated and contorted
By a single species
Capable of selfless compassion, yet
Intent on selfish annihilation
By the desiccation of brotherly love
Sucked from the earth like marrow
from the bone of every contention.
Four sleepy souls in a speeding Rover
Green as the skin of a ripe avocado
Rumble on toward the gashes of heaven
Tipping their timid hearts upward
Praying for rivulets of glory to fall
Around them, upon them, through them
To touch the earth and its children
With the color of love
With the color of light
With the color of life.
With the cascades of heaven.

Tuesday, October 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: travel
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Crossing the Everglades at dawn, en route to catch our flight to Guatemala for a medical missions trip to the town of Joyabaj, the steel grey, totally overcast horizon split open in two small tears, allowing what appeared to be a waterfall of golden light fall onto the edge of the earth. It remained throughout our crossing until we exited for the airport. It was a powerful and moving image, prompting my prayer that we simple human beings could also become small tears in the fabric of this existence through which the beauty of heaven might fall upon those whom we would soon be privileged to treat in our remote clinic.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tan Pratonix 21 November 2016

I am so glad you gave me the Notes about the poem. They added so much to my appreciation of the poem. I can understand the glories of heaven cascading in golden light, falling in radiant streams upon a world hardened and grey. These words need to be pondered over: A world hardened and grayed By a deficit shaped like the absence Of the color of love A world dominated and contorted By a single species Capable of selfless compassion, yet Intent on selfish annihilation By the desiccation of brotherly love.. Thank you for images and the contemplation.

0 0 Reply
Nosheen Irfan 03 November 2016

Superb imagery. A great descriptive poem, written with flair and poetic excellence. A positive, humanist approach to life. A super 10

0 0 Reply
Seamus O Brian 03 November 2016

Thank you, kind poet. I am so pleased you enjoyed it, and so appreciative of your time and comments. I must say that I have truly enjoyed reading your work. Your art has been a blessing, and I can't express how wonderful it is to be part of a community of artists spanning the globe. Beauty and art know no boundaries. Thank you again, and have a blessed day. Neal

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
Close
Error Success