'The School Of What's Next' Poem by Long Tooth

'The School Of What's Next'



Though I don't feel that driven OR misdiagnosed,
Still so many past goals, I find lacking in passion,
Though dragons line up (fancy St. George as toast) ,
When the battle gets done, it seems flame's out of fashion.

I can't say why the letdown, post finishing quest,
You would think celebration might now be in order,
Drink beer, put my feet up, at least have a rest,
But I put on my hat, saddle muse, seek new border.

Oh, 'The School of What's Next' is both 'life' and what 'chills, '
For I frequently find I've more questions than answers,
But gist of its leading still manages thrills
(As its leaps and twists, voice poetry of lithe dancers) .

Trusting Grace is 'sufficient, ' is prayer's simple text,
His provision, my faith; my desire just to serve Him,
To bask in His presence, with praise for 'what's next, '
Harmonize with creation in eternal Love hymn.


Long Tooth
August 22,2017

Tuesday, August 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: celebration,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 28 August 2017

do you even KNOW that this is Long Tooth 's poem page and you sent me a comment response from Roof Missing, AND...................that if you respond to my comment on this page ONLY, i will rarely see it. i just happened to see it now when i came back to collect the poem for the showcase! ! ! i shall look for revisions and stick it in, so to speak! i like to talk 'dirty'. ha ha. bri ;) ok, i reread it and it is 'good enough'. and offered and 'short', two pluses! ! ! thanks.

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Roof Missing 29 August 2017

Roof Missing is the nickname of Long Tooth my friend as I couldn't choose between the two and so, in fact, you can use either name to find me.

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Roof Missing 27 August 2017

Thanks for your comments Bri. Some revisions in fact made! : -)

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