The Screaming Bitch Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

The Screaming Bitch



The screaming bitch,
Is not bi-polar.
I suck and kiss her toes
One army of tounges,
A million bird's.
Like none have come before.
I wash her,
panties in the sink.
Her panty hose.
I daily shave her legs.
And wash the window's,
That I see.
The leafless bush,
Another man.
Not I,
Gave cause to grow.
He gives each rise,
When called.
By her a different name.
And the chair,
In which she sits.
Lines up,
And hides the shadow
On the wall.
Oysters, tuna fish,
Living
By the sea, I eat each
Night.
The music's loud,
This mindless zombie,
Screaming bitch.
In my last life,
Was once my wife.

Sunday, November 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: green
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 15 November 2016

ok, i'm (sort of) proud to say........i'm back! BUT this is a tough one to comment on because there is more than English usage to complain..........i MEAN comment on. i just read it again, and i must say there are several places in the poem where the meaning would vary depending on the punctuation AND i think the punctuation is not the way i would arrange it in some places. for example: I wash her, panties in the sink...............this way i interpret the sentence to mean i wash her, and the panties are in the sink (her panties?) but if i move the comma: I wash her panties in the sink....it would mean to me that the speaker is washing her panties and doing it in the sink. i have a time limit for using my mate's computer, more so these days than some times in the past, so i'll come back to this again.........later. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 14 November 2016

green is a perfect topic for this one. don't we all agree? again, i'll get back to this one, i think, SOME day. ........................... ;) bri

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The Hobbler 13 November 2016

Nicely and very poetically said

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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