The Sea It Was A Stirring Mass Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

The Sea It Was A Stirring Mass

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The sea it was a stirring mass
A ghostly shade of grey,
The cloud hung like a veil of mist
That drew across the bay.

My saddened heart beat like the waves
That rolled upon the shore,
As I walked along that windswept way
Till I could walk no more.

My mind was filled with questions
And was wracked in deep despair,
A broken soul no place to go
Yet found no answers there.

The ebbing tide drew ever in
And hid the prints I'd made,
Upon the sand, I paused and watched
My footmarks slowly fade.

As they were lost I felt the cold
As evening slipped away,
As there I stood and stared upon
The sea of ghostly grey.

2011

Saturday, September 3, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Hillawi 03 February 2012

Capturing the mood and moment beautifully, very touching

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Sajna Kailas 09 September 2011

something is special in your poems i dont know what. really good. i just wonder that the tide fade a number of vestige day by day, if we think it deep a matter of great concern! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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