The Secret Poem by Erick Puma
The Secret
As deep as the ocean's dept,
As deep as this secret I kept,
Far as a road,
Long as a boat,
Dont worry my love this secret I hold,
Will be in my heart locked and closed.
Good theme, nicely written, perfect rhymes. I know your secret...you're in love. Is this your first? Keep writing...see you then.
that's love and its secret well locked inside the heart-boat...nicely worded...good piece...10
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4/26/2024 6:46:05 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This is really good...It's like you're saying its a huge secret but you will not spill. Very nice! :)