The Simplicity Of Surrender Poem by Sonny Rainshine

The Simplicity Of Surrender

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Like an opulent cluster of Concord grapes—No,
more like the silky conical impression of wisteria vine—
the thought first dangled before him, a sign
that creativity had emerged and begun to flow.

The sudden thawing after a winter prolonged:
first the shocking cracking of the ice,
then the pooling of water at the interstice
of the expanding veins, branched and pronged,

softened his self-denunciation;
he would begin to oppose the simplicity of surrender
beginning today, to imagine the possibility of elation
and to slant toward the true and the tender.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 14 April 2008

I've never heard surrender described so beautifully. HG: -) xx

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