The Songs Of Our Heart Hear Then Rise Poem by Susan Williams
The Songs Of Our Heart Hear Then Rise
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The songs of our heart hear them rise
High in the skies
Like morning doves
Calling their loves.
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The songs of our heart hear them sing
joy on the wing
praising always
the newborn days.
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The songs of our heart meet our Lord
Our sorrow poured
His grace received
His love perceived.
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~~~~~~~©2018 Susan Williams
Ever so beautifully sung, lift our hearts to the Lord! .. You know how to sing to the heart, and touch all so deep! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. :) Dear friend Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ another definitely saved
Thank you for your sweet supportive comments - you keep me lifted up! ! ! !
Hey, Susan! I didn’t remember that I had read and also commented on this. This time around I notice how everything in this poem feels like and articulates uplift. Every stanza causes us to look up. It strikes me that this would make a good plainsong chanted as a morning prayer. Hoping this finds you well in all ways, Glen
Thank you for getting under the hood of this poem and finding aspects that you like! I learn a lot from these kinds of critiques! Thank you for the well wishes, Glen!
Yes, a set of heartening stanzas, successfully balance between the quality of the content and the form.
Thank you, sir, for reading and commenting and giving me valuable information on what you liked about the poem. Tis ver helpful!
Uplifting, perfectly balanced, and the form you chose exemplifies the verse. Contained within these words many hymns of praise.
Hello there, Captain! ! ! I am glad to hear that the Minute Style went well with the substance of the poem. Twas a new style for me and I enjoyed using it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is so beautifully written Susan as all that I read from you is. I especially like this one as the heart does sing When In Love. Hear the heart and it will rise you to infinite Skies! . As far as the notes yes I think the spelling should have been minuet....
Ah, good! The more I think about it the more I think my source misspelled minuet because this structure sure sounds like it should be- -but what do I know, I was born clumsy! Thank you for your sweet comments- you know how to uplift the spirits of others! !