The Sparkle Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The Sparkle

Rating: 5.0


Eyes do all tricks
Yet smilingly stick
Show the high peak
And make opponent weak

Yes it is all about charm
But causing no harm
It is to create magic all around
Bring new love in and to find

It may speak or not speak
But shall certainly irk
As it may have all spell bound
Signs to lure and sound

Oh, eyes you are special
With so much of denial
You are right before me
I feel as if cold shadow under tree

You are taking me away
In another world to find way
That has no boundary
But you take me in spell as fairy

Those eyes sparkle in dark
I see it as good start
It represents seducing art
To feel the pulse as inseparable part

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

touching Charles Atwood26 minutes ago It touches the heart in a way that a woman would expect Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

Talented Work Greg Rouse14 minutes ago The way the poem is constructed is nice but I have trouble fully grasping the images and direction. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

good R. Alex Sanders27 minutes ago says a lot but im not a fan of the poem

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Gajanan Mishra 09 January 2014

world that has no boundary, very good sir, I like it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

Eyes do all tricks Yet smilingly stick

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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