The Star (Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

The Star (Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


A star crossed the skies
With my dreams hidden inside
Darkness reigns supreme

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 29 September 2009

In the darkness Star carries hope of light!

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Vijay Menon 29 September 2009

may all your dreams come true and life is illuminated with the happiness and bliss god bless you

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Indira Babbellapati 29 September 2009

darkness has umpteen revelations in store...

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 September 2009

a lovely senryu...sandra...darkness does reign supreme

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Rakesh Bedi 29 September 2009

A nice one, sandra...... but, why darkness reigns supreme? ? ? Let the dreams shine and remove the darkness forever, dear......

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Patti Masterman 06 October 2009

Lovely writing. Could almost swear I already commented on this one, but it seems my memory is as fragile as stardust..(smile)

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Kesav Easwaran 02 October 2009

a dark star in the bright dream...wonderful expression...

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Meggie Gultiano 01 October 2009

Hmmm..another nice piece..Love it! ! !

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Sandra Fowler 01 October 2009

Wonderful interplay of light and darkness. May your hidden dreams be realized. Love, SandraX

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Excellent Sandr! . I like the way darkness reined as the star crossed, like an eclipse. I like the darkness, but not if it is happening to you! A great Senryu. love Karin

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