They danced passionately
Under the canopy
Of the night sky
Formed a single line
Bodies swayed swiftly
And feet moved rhythmically
To the tune of
Achy Breaky Heart.
They laughed sweetly
And endlessly
The echoes of their laughter
Joined the murmur
Of the flowing stream
And when they smiled to each other
The moon and the stars
Are jealous of the sparkles
In their eyes.
Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
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Of the flowing stream...... lovely write..... thank u, dear poetess....
The lines are flowing so smoothly like a stream. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed. Thanks.
And Ever Ever so many well deserved 'Congratulations'! .. And Also Beyond #'S of course! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
And such a wonderous, beautiful and joyful feel! .. Truly incredible! .. Bringing such smiles to the readers heart! ..
Ahh, i was going to catch this next time around... But Awesome! .. So Beautifully Beautifully worded! ..
it is so good to sit here dreaming of this event.... top romantic hearts for this yummy poem
oh! this is so lovely! I dream of being that woman dancing in the arms of her love! Thank you for sharing this with us
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A rhymical, so lovely amorous poetic dance, we feel the loving movement as if transported and in a trance. Such an unforgettable and lovely poem. Thank you for the gifted romance!