The Story Of Garlic And Onion Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

The Story Of Garlic And Onion



In a warmly farm with a kind farmer
Who product delicious fruits which were charmer

There were a an onion and a cute Garlic
Their appearance was like a lactic

Farmer sell all his product,
All of them were deduct

Those two friends see the world out of farm for the first time,
They saw good things, nice actions, and awful crime

In a nice big store they were put,
But nobody buy them, so they were soot

A woman said: oh look at this bad smell fruit,
She means the onion; the condition of the poor fruit was acute

The Garlic hadn't a better condition he was worse,
He talk with onion, and sometimes verse

Nobody bought them, so they were fester
For sure the humans have to be alter

In our life, sometimes we judge a person from his cloth or his shape
We said: my God! He is talented! No matter what he is, no problem if he is an ape

Many people like this way of living, they don't care,
They would shout the weak of others, they even blare

Its important for us to be powerful and give them a smile,
We never have to melt and be weak like a sandpile!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Judging is or daily food
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 03 July 2014

wonderful written poem, i like the theme of a farm setting well penned Ellias

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Sina Farajzadeh 03 August 2012

It's a good moral poem. I like you rhyming.

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Unwritten Soul 15 July 2012

Love it, garlic and onion both are important as they were used for basic cooking here.....how cruel we to judge them by look, like onion, we can remove their old layers to have new silky new layer, as for garlic it can survive for long..if we have chance to plant it sure we will have healthy ones....so just look at human, if we give chance to them, we care, so they will be great person....nothing is worthless, everything come with value, i love the poem, great comparison_Unwritten Soul

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Captain Cur 15 July 2012

Good comparison between the left behind onion and garlic which have a ripe smell and the conditions of many homeless and unwanted people. Understanding and love produces all. Good poem.

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

Iran, Islamic republic of
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