A day is just like the sun
From the sky,
With flying birds, and
Clouds in many uncanny ways.
Then the air told me it is from nature;
However it is actually from the heart itself.
It is hopefully
From both…
The sun sometimes is reflexing
More lights.
In the most days,
The sun leads us to believe
That we know each other.-
We do not understand it really,
But we need it.
The Sun is life! This is a very amazing and well penned write that clearly shows your great poetic talent and understanding of the importance of the Sun! 10+++ Keep it up, my dear friend Jiang! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...
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I really like the personification of the air you have in this poem, and how it it seems both conversational and informational. The conflict and contrast you present in our lack of understanding and attempts at interpreting our surroundings is well done.