The Sun Has Set Poem by me poet yeps poet

The Sun Has Set

Rating: 5.0


Once your sunsets
your time is set

nothing resurfaces
Time gone,
is gone forever
who has since drowned
in the distant horizon
who has ever returned
ever

time only shall smile at ye
naivety of humanity
time alone
on the wings of time
does flee
passed an unknown eternity
know this all ye
and time says

TIMELY!

Saturday, June 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The sun has set
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 18 June 2019

Time gone, is gone forever............it will come back never. Great poem with deep realisation. Anjandev Roy.

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Srijita Mondal 17 June 2019

" nothing resurfaces Time gone, is gone forever " 1000000000++++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 June 2019

THANKS SM WHERE S PG HE DOESN T READ ME NOR HAVE U READ HIS POETRY ON ME HALE PP ETC

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Jennifer Birchall 16 June 2019

Time is so precious, spend it wisely. Thought provoking poem dear poet, thank you.

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 June 2019

'time alone on the wings of time does flee passed an unknown eternity know this all ye and time says '.. is simply beautiful. Your talent of weaving words to penned down your thoughts is simply awesome. Liked it.

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Kevin Patrick 15 June 2019

Your a master of thought and for yeps, the opening lines are meditative and proactive, if those lines don't make one want to live their life to the fullest, their sun has already set! 10!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 June 2019

thanks Kevin for the nice evaluation and appreciation kindly

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