you go all places
you worship so many
why don't you even look up at me
in a long queue
you would stand
for hours and days
you would wait
to see a golden statue and pray
if you are overwhelmned with gold
iam all gold
why don't you see
as you are all alive
coz of me
i too draw my
love from all of you
don't you know that
atleast from now
look up at me
let me have the love from you
LOOK AT ME
THE SUN'S PLEA
[many a busy days we spend without looking up]
very brilliant thoughts..i love this... so sweet is the sun's plea...very humble..yet striking the way you choose your words are so tender... gentle plea of the sun who lights us every single day... really a brilliant idea, Sam...intelligible write... 10+++ l♥ vel♥ ots, maia
i don't want the sun to beg on me, i'm waiting for its precious golden shine everyday. this is a lovely and cleaver write, dear poet! 10: -)
much taken for granted sun in a tropical country like ours...
Dear friend, I've uploaded my comment below as 'On reading A Sun’s Plea by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan & Premji’s comment'. Thanks for the inspiration, to you and Prem. Angel
I love God. I love nature. So, this is also my plea. Very nice poem: -)
Giver of life Yet cursed On Dog Days Scorching Sun We easily say, Can we do without it, Even for a day? Looked up to Maybe Only on Pongal day! Prem is right Sunrise & Sunsets Daily paintings By it's creator God In tribute to Sun! Angel
dear samy, this poem is an eyeopener... the best scene of any one's life is the sunrise and set...........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'atleast from now look up at me let me have the love from you' This is a lovely poem on the sun's plea. Love with 10+