The Sun's Rays And The Tree Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Sun's Rays And The Tree

Rating: 5.0


The tree reaches out,
For the sun's lovely rays
And leans into them,
For their warmth.
Yet darkness casts its spell
And they are forced to part.

Like a devoted lover,
The tree always waits
In any weather,
For the light of dawn.
So eager to welcome sun's rays
And feel their warm embrace.


Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 29 July 2022

Like a devoted lover, The tree always waits In any weather, For the light of dawn. So eager to welcome sun's rays And feel their warm embrace.---Such a wonderful poem.

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Bharati Nayak 29 July 2022

Love is like warm sun rays and all living creatures thrive in its presence.

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 July 2022

Love is like that a shed that gives shelter to those who seek it. Nice write. Loved it.

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Nabakishore Dash 30 July 2022

exquisitely written Mam.The tree is the greatest and most devoted lover because their love, the tree knows, provides food and fodder for all of us since they are the first level of food chain.Enchanting expression.

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Nosheen Irfan 31 July 2022

Beautifully penned! A metaphorical depiction of true love.5 stars

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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2023

Ever such deeply beautiful thoughts! .. Ever so heartwarming! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2023

This is so very beautiful and written with such beauty in heart! ..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 November 2022

Most beautiful Love poem I ever read, now I am reading once again, I love this Love poem, created with metaphors. Magnificent great poem about True Love by the Great Poetess.

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Susan Williams 28 August 2022

your love for God's handiwork is so evident in the words of this poem---a billion stars

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Rebecca Navarre 13 August 2022

An amazing description so deeply felt! .. So beautifully pictured! .. Definitely, Definitely 5 Stars! ...++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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