Honey
when your heart
is broken into pieces;
not even the slightest
we like to see you
scampering bewildered
in the labyrinth
you make in the sky-
look at the world of stars
and the unspoken lives therein.
Here are we waiting
to see your rise from the stupor
and from your Dark Matrix,
a sword of thunder
that speaks to us with a Big Sound.
excellent lines- Here are we waiting to see your rise from the stupor and from your Dark Matrix, a sword of thunder that speaks to us with a Big Sound. great 10++++
A thoroughly motivational poem! I loved the intensity of expression! In all fairness, 'The Sword Of Thunder' is fabulous piece of poetry! I appreciate the wonderful power of your creativity! (10)
Your comment always motivates me. Thank you very much for making an inspiring comment again. Chandan
Here are we waiting to see your rise from the stupor and from your Dark Matrix, a sword of thunder.....you inspire me now my dear poet with such a powerful imagination and apt words describing what is in your heart... there is so much of power in ur poem. love it. tony
The sound of thunder is the voice of Nature like the roar of lions! Nice one!
I’m totally agreed with you. Yes, one always needs to roar like a lion to overcome one’s dejection.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Marvelous lines beyond the realms of human imagination well done o what an accomplishment at such a young age keep it up the thunder is loud rain shall also come
You're too generous in your comment, which is inspirational as well as loving. Chandan