The Thoughts Inside My Head Poem by Eric Elliott

The Thoughts Inside My Head

Rating: 4.5


By Landan Chandler

Boared sitting in class,
still thinking of her,
wish I could erase her from my mind,
But she wont seem to fade,
so now I sit all alone,
wating for her to go away.

I said it first,
but it seem to hurt,
you looked away,
never changing you confused gaze,
so why did it mean nothing to you?
When I said 'I Love you.'

You scream, you yell,
you say awfall things,
I grit my teeth and try not to break your face,
But all in all, it drags me down,
and nothing hurts like your mouth.

And now I wait,
but these thoughts won't go away,
no matter how hard I try,
they can't seem to fade,
so still I wait for the day,
when the war inside my head
Will finally end... for a day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amber Roser 11 October 2009

I really like what was said about nothing hurting like your mouth. Sometimes it is the things that are said that leave a lasting stain. All in all I think that it was pretty good.

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