Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Rookie - 3 Points (Singapore)

** The Three Wishes ** - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Son, what will you do
If you are given three wishes from God?
The teacher stares at the 13 years old student
With a deep sigh
Adam’s tears roll back
His eyes as sharp as a razor blade
Glancing at Mr. Cool
Not a word spoken
He picks up his pen and starts to write
He folds up the written piece
And hand it over to the teacher
One condition applies
The teacher should read it when he got home
Adam is a gifted kid
Born with silver spoon in his mouth
The only son in a family of four
Before he goes to bed
With a deep breathe
Mr. Cool reads the note
My first wish
I want to be an orphan
I want to feel the suffering
I want to feel the painstaking
So that when I grow up
I’d know what hardship is
My second wish
I want to be blind
I want to feel the darkness
I want to feel the gloom
I want to feel the beauty of the world
Without looking
I want to feel the agony of the world
Without seeing
My third wish
I want to be the richest man on earth
I want to share my wealth with the poor
I want to help the homeless
The jobless
The education less
The family less
The loveless
If there is any fourth wish
I want the three wishes
Granted to me by God
Mr. Cool’s tears roll back
He goes to sleep
With a smile


Comments about ** The Three Wishes ** by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • Rookie Ashish Goyal (8/15/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    nice
    three wishes for the feelings and have a heart for others. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie Ted M (7/27/2009 2:01:00 PM)

    An excellent poem, though just a wish. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (6/23/2009 4:37:00 PM)

    wise beautiful poem..excellent writing.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Subroto Chatterjee (6/13/2009 3:02:00 AM)

    Sweet dreams.
    Cheers.
    Subroto (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Allan Macli Borges (2/10/2009 2:40:00 AM)

    profound and sharp ideas, flowing in little verses that catch us till the end - a beautiful end indeed - you are really gifted. one more 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Rhodes (1/25/2009 9:56:00 PM)

    If this poem leaves someone 'cold', well, that person ain't got an ounce of awareness, feeling, compassion or love in his mind or heart. This writing of truth is hitting the nail on the head successfully with nothing more needed to make its mark. This is an easy insightful read into what we all need to think of, heed and act upon! Great write! Young boys and girls are sensitive and tuned-in today. They're are the 'Hope Generation'. My best, Carol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Michelle Melody (1/10/2009 9:23:00 PM)

    A very soppy poem I'm affraid it leaves me cold (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Electronic Griot (1/10/2009 9:22:00 AM)

    i feel you on this one.
    EXCELLENT!
    (Been there too ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Elbert Matt Loubser (12/16/2008 2:44:00 AM)

    I like the way this poem swirves away from traditional wishes made by others. The boy is clearly selfless. We would do good to follow his example in the way we think and act. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David E. Patton (12/13/2008 5:27:00 AM)

    you are a gifted poet who can write outside of the box through you poetry one can this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (12/9/2008 3:50:00 AM)

    this poem touches my heart..words are well selected and well defined..
    ......If i will be the child, HOW WOULD I BE? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie asma Jone (12/3/2008 4:04:00 PM)

    love this poem, its so touching...makes your eye teary, like the wishes part awww.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zaarah Jasmin (11/30/2008 1:14:00 PM)

    This poem is really touching, i rate 10.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie *Trusting You* (11/16/2008 2:40:00 PM)

    I love this poem! this is very good. I am going to add it to my favs. great job.
    *Purkey Girl* (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marie Diop (11/2/2008 6:45:00 PM)

    this is really a touching poem. great job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Palas Kumar Ray (10/7/2008 7:02:00 AM)

    It would have been a GREAT MISS in my life had I not read this poem Sulaiman.
    I know I shall always remember these three wishes in my life henceafter.
    How simillar this boy to the ancient Siddhartha who became Lord Buddha in later life! Your poem make us feel how selfish we always remain. I wish if each of us could wish like this boy the world would have been so different! Perheps we could hear what a bird sing and what wind goes on telling us.Perhaps we could make flowers our friend.
    But alas! we are Human.only human. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Lily Law (9/24/2008 1:21:00 AM)

    my only wish is that people will see, feel and think just like the boy is..
    sir, thanks a lot for an inspiring poem that u had greatly wrote.. ^-^ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Caterpillar MC (9/22/2008 3:05:00 PM)

    I wish everyone incuding me, would think like the young boy in the poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 316 Points Marilyn Lott (9/21/2008 8:11:00 AM)

    This is truly a heartfelt story about someone so young. If only everyone could feel just a small portion of compassion such as this. I enjoyed this, Sulairman!

    Best Wishes,
    Marilyn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ahvana Dutt (9/19/2008 8:06:00 AM)

    I give this one a ten. It is a wonderfully and well expressed poem. Keep it up! (Report) Reply

Read all 108 comments »




Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 23, 2008


[Hata Bildir]