The Touch Of Life! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

The Touch Of Life!

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My soul is burning in the captivity of my lover
My heart is on fire and is burning with desire
To survive my soul demands the touch of life
And I seek refuge in the proximity of my lover.

© Aarzoo Mehek.

The Touch Of Life!
Wednesday, February 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,refuge
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 11 February 2016

Let this fire be arrested till your heart else everybody will get a sever burns from this love fire...Just on the lighter side....LOVED IT.....100++++

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Aarzoo Mehek 11 February 2016

Hahahaha beware: D

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Nosheen Irfan 13 February 2016

Beautiful expression of love. It touches the reader's heart gently. Love is necessary for soul n lover is the refuge for the soul.10 many times.

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Kavya . 10 February 2016

too good write and loved the picturesque image too...

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2016

Yes! The desire; your desire! ! ! Seen in your eyes; in need of deep love. Nice piece of work.

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Sandra Feldman 26 November 2020

Very passionate and sincere. Lovely poem!

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Rajnish Manga 23 July 2020

How sensible! Love is not a one-sided affair. Let it be a celebration for the souls. Thanks.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 November 2016

I hope you gain what you pine for...soon

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Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2016

A truly beautiful poem, nicely penned..................................

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 February 2016

such a beautiful love poem. you have a romantic soul. thanku dear poetess. tony

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