The Ultimate Blow Poem by chantel weston

The Ultimate Blow



The ultimate blow,
has been given
and when it lands
all reason to hope
is gone, all good feelings perish.

All the pain
that had been held abay
its flooding back,
its taking over like rushing torents.

Ripping
gashes in to my flesh,
gushing crimson regret
all over the room,
my pain flows freely
unrestricted and unrestraind
no more room for all my pain.

The door
to my soul is ripped off its hinges
the force of my pain
flinging it to the side,
now its on the floor
under all the crimson that
holds,
all my pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tessa Monaghan 20 January 2009

i dont even know what to say about this one chantelie! hmm yeah i have no idea haha. exept, i think the fact that i have known you for like 9 years, really just helps me understand all these and see where exactly your coming from. ya know? i have the opportunity to really tear apart ur poems and see what they TRULY mean. and each poem helps me understand you more and more...if thats really possible haha. luv ya! SS

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portland, Oregon
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