The Unknown Poem by Hanna Maria

The Unknown

Rating: 5.0


Keep me away from those wandering eyes
I am hiding, Hiding in Disguise

All those I’ve loved, I pushed them away
So they departed, Departed in Dismay

I will never stop moving until I am free
They are searching, searching, Searching for Me

The light has gone, it is no longer day
I am losing, losing, Losing my Way

Here I stand so cold and frail
They try finding, finding, Finding my Trail

But it is too late If only I’d known
Now I’m dying, dying, Dying Alone...

Friday, October 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,lost,regret
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's good sometimes to try to find your own way but don't think you have to do it all by yourself, don't push away those that would help you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 23 October 2015

Beautiful and meaningful poem. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Sarah Persson 16 January 2016

Very good piece of poetry Hanna

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 January 2016

But, you will known one day. Nice work.

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Fabrizio Frosini 23 October 2015

''don't push away those that would help you'' a good write, wise Hanna! ;)

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Muhammad Ali 23 October 2015

While reading the poem i felt myself Hiding Departed Wandering and Dying. Great power of expression. I like this poem.

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Kelly Kurt 23 October 2015

Nicely written, Hanna. Thanks

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