The Unreachable Star Poem by Basma Amir

The Unreachable Star



To do the best in your test
To be safe in the unsafeble world
To fight with people to get the right
To see the light from far far away
To quite the unquitable people
To try when you're always cry
To find the beautiful dreams in your mind
To get the cause without any pause
To find a person that really love you
and you love him too
To reach this unreachable star

This is what i want to reach this star
no matter how hopeless, no matter how far
No matter how sronger to reach this star
You will always be in try
to get your own dream, but please don't cry
'cause in this world whenever you try, you'll always fall in troubles
like when someone burst all the bubbles
This world is bad 'cause the people on it
and they are always sit
eating and drinking and no other thoughts are in their brains
Not like the best organisms which are the cranes

Never mind all these bad things
and always be in try to reach your dream
If you're in trouple, try to scream
in a high loud voice
This is your own choice
to make this world better
and awlays remember when you were a whippersnipper

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara Hosseini 16 March 2012

Hope you reach that star! but you had some spelling errors my friend :)

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Basma Amir 03 April 2012

Thanks so much Ohood hope u too to reach ur star: D

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Ohood Al.shabibi 30 March 2012

You have great feelings and they are standing tight in this poem believe me u won't reach one star. You are going to reach hundreds of them. :)

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Basma Amir 24 March 2012

thanks Ahmed! ! ! .........

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 24 March 2012

strong poem. sent the hope to my heart

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Basma Amir 22 March 2012

thanks Sara, sorry cause i wrote the poem from my callphone, i had some wrong spelling

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