i wish for a rain
it erases the trace of mourning
i wish for a silence
bury the marks of sorrow..
i wish for a thunder
it hides the noisy crowd
i wish for waves
they make a pleasant sound..
i wish for a candle
undemanding as it melts
i wish a dark night
it makes me sleep..
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A candle undemanding as it melts.....thunder hiding crowds.....rain washing away sorrows...u have used very nice imagery thru simple words...I like the poem...
sure.rightful demand.naizz poem.enjoyed reading it. a 10+++ from me surya
All the wishes of Lady Grace are legitimate ones to be granted with God's grace.
This is a beautiful and tenderly expressed poem, Lady Grace, and your words in it are deeply touching. Carl.
‘I wish for a candle undemanding as it melts’ ~ Wow! Great philosophy in it…no getting only giving…. Thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
wish for a candle undemanding as it melts i wish a dark night it makes me sleep.. every subsance has got its own merits/demerits. it suggests one is meant for each other and love is to die for others.. you can hide but despite that you wish so many things..i wish all drams could come true....beautiful write....10 read mineall dreams cometrue.. what do i seek..
Hmmm sleepless Good write drink milk and you will feel sleepy nice write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Naizz my friend this is a wonderful piece..it has a sense of healing to it...it a very well penned poem...keep up the great work