The Young Soldier Poem by A.J. Enigma

The Young Soldier

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Though lying in the grip of pain, the young soldier was not yet slain.

He did not scream, nor shriek or wail despite the blood which stained his mail. His palm was red, he clutched his wound, slowly fading from this afternoon.

Already ‘round him men lay dead, but the soldier breathed as thought filled his head. Back home awaited his fairest love, to whom he’d sworn on stars above his safe return one fine day soon, a promise broken this afternoon.

He’d been a fool with sword in hand, fought for honor, for glory and land. But now as ‘neath him leaves turned red, it was for her he fought instead. For one last chance to hold her tightly, their love to savor, not take lightly. To hear her sing her lovely tune, oh how he wished this afternoon.

Though his body did grow weary, the sun above was not so dreary. Its warmth embraced him, called him home, he did not fear nor feel alone. The time had come for his return, so many lessons he did now learn.

Behind closed eyes, he saw her face and then his heart had ceased its pace. Gone was he, like others ‘round though even more fell on the ground.

A sight indeed so truly vile but on his face, he wore a smile.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The inspiration to write this poem came about when someone sent me the link to hear a very touching and sad Welsh song called Can y Llong (That's Welsh for 'The Ship Song') by a singer named Gwyneth Glyn. The song itself was sung from a sad woman's perspective, and the lyrics were her lament for her lover lost at sea, and how she still waits for him, looking for him on every ship that comes to port.

In some way I wrote this poem as both a manifestation of my own complicated feelings for someone and as a musing at the other side of the story told in that song. What if the reason the woman's lover never came home, was because he was killed in battle, but as he lay dying he regretted ever going off to war and leaving her behind?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loyd C Taylor Sr 19 May 2014

Hello poet AJ and I really enjoyed your poem and the notes as well. This is sadly the end for man women and men and we owe a lot to their sacrifice. Thanks for sharing. I just posted my poem An Old Soldier along with the musical recitation. If you have time, please check it out and let me know your thoughts. Thanks, Loyd

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